An unwanted guest

This is the little bit of story that wouldn’t let me sleep (sometime last year) until I wrote it. It was 1am but I grabbed my notebook and sat in the windowsill in the lounge, writing to the light of the streetlight outside.

It’s part of Bree’s Vampire Rugby Part 2 story. I keep getting inspired to write about her characters for some reason. Must be all those creative meetings…

“Are we not waiting for Alex and what’s-her-name?” Cynthia asked as her parents sat down and started helping themselves to the roasted veges and roast pork on the table.

“Her name is Lizzie,” Helen replied sternly. “You really need to let go of that little hang up of yours, Cynthia. Your brother is really happy, for the first time in a long time, and you should be happy for him.”

Cynthia scoffed.

“I’m sure the novelty will wear off soon enough, and he’ll see her for what she is, a two timing gold digging tramp!”

“Cynthia Margaret!!”

Cynthia didn’t look up at her mum and kept her eyes firmly on her plate.

“What? You don’t wonder about her? He’s known her two minutes and she’s all he talks about. And she already had a GIRLFRIEND! That should tell you all you need to know!” Continue reading


The problem with real people…

See, the problem when you base your characters on real (more or less) well-known people because you have a crush on them and your brain keeps coming up with fantasies, is that when it comes to posting your story or parts thereof, you will need to change their names and definitely their occupation.

Of course then you run the risk of changing the tone of your story a bit. And that sucks. I like rugby players. Not all of them, but a few. I like them a lot.

So I tend to write stories based on some of them. Of course I change the names so it’s not so obvious to the general public who exactly the characters are based on — besides, I read a blog post just yesterday about how it’s better to let your readers fill in some of the blanks about a character so the story will grab them on a more personal level and I happen to agree.

A bit over 2 years ago Bree started writing a story we jokingly refer to as Vampire Rugby about rugby players who get cursed by a witch and turned into life energy absorbing vampires. It started as a joke, but 235K words later, she started writing Part 2 and it wasn’t a joke anymore, but a proper story. (the vampire rugby link will take you to a post by Bree on the subject, with a deliciously smutty excerpt).Here’s the link for all the bits she posted of that story.

Two nights ago Bree got up at 2am to write something that demanded to be written. It reminded me that last year, while she was writing Part 2, I got an idea in my head, a scene that wouldn’t let me sleep until I wrote it. It was 1am so I gave up and walked into the lounge with my notebook and wrote the scene then went back to bed.

I opened that document again yesterday and changed all the names but when Bree asked if I was going to leave the bits about rugby as they were I wasn’t sure what to answer. I do want to leave them, because we (yes, I say ‘we’ because while Bree is the one doing the writing, I am very much involved in the plotting of the idea process so I claim part ownership. Sue me) wrote this about rugby players.

But at the same time it makes it very obvious who we wrote the story about and I’m not 100% comfortable with that.

I feel rather stuck.